Pitch feedback

The feedback from our pitch was generally good, however Louisa thought that it would be hard to film on the bus and so we're contemplating whether or not to keep or remove the bus scene, also Louisa said that we needed a soundtrack as without dialect and a soundtrack the title sequence would be very flat and needs a soundtrack which Darnell is in the process of creating through Garage Band, and should be completed by the 28th of January