Rough cut feed back 2 (From Dan)

After Dan viewed our rough cut we were told to decrease all the texting we had as due to the fact our title sequence is a football , we have to make the texting scenes smaller and increase actual footage of the football. Furhter more,we were also told to decrease the lenght of it as currently it is a 3minutes , so in order to do this we are going to cut or shorten the scenes as much as possible. In addition , some shots were way too far and narrow so we have to improve that. However he did say the various shots were used properly and effectivly.